Before I decided to show my animation to Neil, I wanted to make sure that it was completely finished, so that they could see everything that I wanted, witout having to explain what might happen.
Also I wanted to make sure that I only had the changes to make to my animation, instead of finishing it and then changing it.
Here are the comments that Chris and Neil had said:
Potentially strong idea needs careful finessing to work well.
The speed which we move through the layers needs to be faster. Overall piece could be shorter. Perhaps add elegant type to emphasise unique nature of the packaging but without appearing scientific.
Good choice of music.
Add 7 Layers of Protection above the part where the viewer can see all of the layers for the first time.
