After the crit I had made all of the changes that were mentioned the Neil wanted me to do, and to make sure there was nothing else, I sent the finished product to him to see si he wanted anything else changed.
Here was his response:
Hi Marie,
this looks very good - can you possibly add the website domainwww.pure-thirst.com at the end of the video so anyone who wants more detailhas a signpost (link) where to go?
Thank you again for investing your creative talent into my brand.
Best regards Neil
I then changed what he wanted, and I gave him 2 options about where to put the website link, either 1. below the tag line, or 2. fade everything out and fade in the website afterwards.
Option 1 is probably my preferred choice - if it's being accessed via amobile phone, they can then choose whether to go to the web site for moredetails. Can the site url possibly be a 'hyperlink' for convenience?
I had a look into hyperlinking and I couldn't find anything that allowed me to do it.
In the end, Neil said: Looks great Marie - thank you again.
I have put in our email conversation to demonstrate how I have constantly kept in contact with the client to make sure that everything I was doing was to what he wanted and to what he wanted to say within the brand.
