HI Marie
This is looking very good, and professional. Well done.
There are a few things which I think you might need to look at:
- The ilearn home page with the message about measles should not be shown publicly – it isn’t good for the college’s image
- I also think it is best not to mention attendance info on i-learn, simply because it does not relate to my area of control.
- The pauses and hesitations are very obvious at the start – you may want to look at these.
- The library staff do not work in Hastings, but Grove House, Park and Lewes
I hope this helps
The posters are looking good.
Many thanks
Denice
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